Friday, February 15, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 23 - Dog Fighting


Dog fighting should be illegal because it has the POTENTIAL to put dogs in harm. For example, any
losing dog is killed by shooting or other forms of cruel punishment. In addition, dog fighting is a DISTINCT way of entertainment that puts animals in harm for pleasure. Also, people that abuse dogs and have a child is a FORMULA for child abuse too. They like take their anger out on living things. In conclusion, dog fighting is cruel and should be illegal. If it hurts the animal, its not right.

1 comment:

  1. I like that you elaborated on your ideas within this paragraph. I agree that any activity that harms pets should be stopped. Good job!

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